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MaetNameno
04-21-2013, 05:50 AM
Of course there are citations in the parenthesis that no one will understand, but other than that I want to know what other people think of this paper I wrote for English Comp II.
http://pastebin.com/An3hbqTa
dzpliu
04-21-2013, 06:03 AM
What level is this? senior high?
The Mayor
04-21-2013, 07:07 AM
Of course there are citations in the parenthesis that no one will understand, but other than that I want to know what other people think of this paper I wrote for English Comp II.
http://pastebin.com/An3hbqTa


Very well written, well done :) This is very relevant considering the price of healthy food these days.
MaetNameno
04-22-2013, 12:19 AM
What level is this? senior high?

It's for my freshman course at university.


Very well written, well done :) This is very relevant considering the price of healthy food these days.

I was hoping for your approval most knowing that you teach at a undisclosed university and such. :)
EDIT: And since I'm on this life long mission to find out what university it is I've done some research and the closest I can guess would be New Zealand but I could be wrong.
The Mayor
04-22-2013, 01:03 AM
It's for my freshman course at university.



I was hoping for your approval most knowing that you teach at a undisclosed university and such. :)
EDIT: And since I'm on this life long mission to find out what university it is I've done some research and the closest I can guess would be New Zealand but I could be wrong.

I see you have deciphered "the land of the long white cloud" :p
MaetNameno
04-22-2013, 03:01 AM
I see you have deciphered "the land of the long white cloud" :p
Google helps :P.