XxKanexX
05-08-2006, 08:26 AM
I've re-named some of my poems (My favourite ones) to give them a more serious yet appealing perspective.
I wrote all of these poems. Comment, please.
Blessings Of A Heart Beat..
Her hair strips down, released from the restrictive
grips of her thin, emerald hair band.
Finally, she is seen to the world.
Such beauty, elegance beyond imagination.
A bright, glowing ray of white emerges from beyond her,
Brighter than an angels or Magnesium set alight
in the far distance of a dreary night.
The silk on her gown hovers with the wind,
and the tassels float briefly behind her
radiant, swan neck.
Her eyes bleed with innocents, love and compassion.
and her skin flows softer than fresh layers of newly batten
cotton.
She is one, but yet more all.
Kept with me, To catch me if I fall.
Swiftly arose by the incoming breeze,
An angel set on earth,
to help those in need.
Everything Happens For A Reason..
Hidden behind those glistening eyes,
I hear calls for help. For guidance.
Why do you do such hurtful things?
To those, but yet yourself, too.
Youre innocents can't hide what has happened,
And you can't erase the pain.
No-one wants you to do this alone,
You can't manage the dread, the hurt, the loss.
Look at all the people who offer their' love to you,
Can't you just take it, for us?
Like a shattering window my tears fall for you,
Take our support and hold it close to your heart.
Be happy again, don't re-live the pain.
Fight the darkness, fight yourself.
Don't give in to what you don't understand.
Everything happens for a reason,
But it's in us to change all we can.
But yet the reasons we cause are in ourselves,
and are left there, to not be forgotten.
Questioning My Heart..
I don't know what to do,
Fighting with myself if i'm in love with you.
I'm dazed, confused, and eager for more.
But still uncertain, i can't be sure.
One part of me says yes, One part of me's scared.
What the future holds, is what i want to unfold.
Do you love me back? Or am i just playing the fool.
Drowned in my own thoughts, My minds using me as a tool.
I love everything about you, I want to know more.
Just to be near you, is a taunt and lure.
I want to be the one, who catches you when you fall.
My heart dosn't know which direction to follow at all.
Taking a chance, is taking a risk.
For you i'm prepared to gain what i've missed.
Even if it means, loosing everything i've wanted,
Even if it means, leaving broken hearted.
Being around you makes me light up with joy,
It takes me into a deep thought of your loving soul.
What could i do, tell me the way.
But it is a risk i shall take, just to see you every day.
What I Could Say
Looking deep, straight into your eyes.
Shows more than a window to your direct soul.
Everywhere you go and Everywhere you've been,
Seems to lighten up Everyone and Everything.
What i see in you is worth more than i can say.
Impossible to be explained in any straight forward way.
The stars in the sky,
The dimmed moon lit glow,
The suns radiant beams of extracting light
and the soft petal from a rose.
Nothing is worth what you give to me,
A loving companion and an enternal friend.
And what i hope to return, for your generous care,
Is everything that i've felt for you.
But everything more that you've showed me.
It's War
Obliviant Moons, Screaching Suns,
High pitch noises of tourmenting Guns.
The bullets swift past and contact with pentrating force
as men are shot down.
Grenades fly down from the skys, exploding as their' timer reaches end.
I duck in the barrows, and reload for the fight.
Cautiously i approach and disguise beneath the black ash sand.
My breath becomes heavy,
My heart pounds for victory,
My eyes sharpen and gleem behind my innocents.
I raise my gun and aim for the enemy,
Who'm think they have beaten us to our final distraught.
Carefully i position myself, The sweat ripples against the sand.
I pull the half the triger and grin with all pleasants.
Next is them,
To feel the penetrational force of my presents.
©K.F 2006 - All rights reserved
I wrote all of these poems. Comment, please.
Blessings Of A Heart Beat..
Her hair strips down, released from the restrictive
grips of her thin, emerald hair band.
Finally, she is seen to the world.
Such beauty, elegance beyond imagination.
A bright, glowing ray of white emerges from beyond her,
Brighter than an angels or Magnesium set alight
in the far distance of a dreary night.
The silk on her gown hovers with the wind,
and the tassels float briefly behind her
radiant, swan neck.
Her eyes bleed with innocents, love and compassion.
and her skin flows softer than fresh layers of newly batten
cotton.
She is one, but yet more all.
Kept with me, To catch me if I fall.
Swiftly arose by the incoming breeze,
An angel set on earth,
to help those in need.
Everything Happens For A Reason..
Hidden behind those glistening eyes,
I hear calls for help. For guidance.
Why do you do such hurtful things?
To those, but yet yourself, too.
Youre innocents can't hide what has happened,
And you can't erase the pain.
No-one wants you to do this alone,
You can't manage the dread, the hurt, the loss.
Look at all the people who offer their' love to you,
Can't you just take it, for us?
Like a shattering window my tears fall for you,
Take our support and hold it close to your heart.
Be happy again, don't re-live the pain.
Fight the darkness, fight yourself.
Don't give in to what you don't understand.
Everything happens for a reason,
But it's in us to change all we can.
But yet the reasons we cause are in ourselves,
and are left there, to not be forgotten.
Questioning My Heart..
I don't know what to do,
Fighting with myself if i'm in love with you.
I'm dazed, confused, and eager for more.
But still uncertain, i can't be sure.
One part of me says yes, One part of me's scared.
What the future holds, is what i want to unfold.
Do you love me back? Or am i just playing the fool.
Drowned in my own thoughts, My minds using me as a tool.
I love everything about you, I want to know more.
Just to be near you, is a taunt and lure.
I want to be the one, who catches you when you fall.
My heart dosn't know which direction to follow at all.
Taking a chance, is taking a risk.
For you i'm prepared to gain what i've missed.
Even if it means, loosing everything i've wanted,
Even if it means, leaving broken hearted.
Being around you makes me light up with joy,
It takes me into a deep thought of your loving soul.
What could i do, tell me the way.
But it is a risk i shall take, just to see you every day.
What I Could Say
Looking deep, straight into your eyes.
Shows more than a window to your direct soul.
Everywhere you go and Everywhere you've been,
Seems to lighten up Everyone and Everything.
What i see in you is worth more than i can say.
Impossible to be explained in any straight forward way.
The stars in the sky,
The dimmed moon lit glow,
The suns radiant beams of extracting light
and the soft petal from a rose.
Nothing is worth what you give to me,
A loving companion and an enternal friend.
And what i hope to return, for your generous care,
Is everything that i've felt for you.
But everything more that you've showed me.
It's War
Obliviant Moons, Screaching Suns,
High pitch noises of tourmenting Guns.
The bullets swift past and contact with pentrating force
as men are shot down.
Grenades fly down from the skys, exploding as their' timer reaches end.
I duck in the barrows, and reload for the fight.
Cautiously i approach and disguise beneath the black ash sand.
My breath becomes heavy,
My heart pounds for victory,
My eyes sharpen and gleem behind my innocents.
I raise my gun and aim for the enemy,
Who'm think they have beaten us to our final distraught.
Carefully i position myself, The sweat ripples against the sand.
I pull the half the triger and grin with all pleasants.
Next is them,
To feel the penetrational force of my presents.
©K.F 2006 - All rights reserved