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Main
01-06-2008, 09:06 AM
orignal link is from my facebook http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?pid=21104&id=508683841
it has some crappy copy right at the back, and if you serch it on google, you can prolly still find the background of the image (i've edited abit)
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/6874/n508683841211041633yp5.jpg

I did the black side and my bud alex did the other side (he was in love..)

This is the words if you can't see clearly (red-black)
I believe that love is___________I believe that love is

Long relationship______________Lies that hurt
Over due crush_______________Only few survive
Very caring__________________Very tough to get through
Ever lasting__________________Ever lasting pain (trust me...)

You'd never be happier_________Year's i've wasted on you
On the longest day of my life_____Ouch..the pain inside my heart
Undying love__________________Until the end of my life


i have an other one, but i need to ask my grade 8 teacher for it..

Jackrawl
01-07-2008, 10:19 PM
http://youtube.com/watch?v=d_zw3XHJR5k

Just joking. It's pretty good.

L3ss Than 33
01-08-2008, 02:06 AM
Decent for 8th grade. However, in a poem describing what one believes love is, I didn't like how Alex used the word "love" in the last line. How can "undying love" describe love?

Main
01-09-2008, 09:34 PM
i dunno why lol..

and this poem i did it in grade 9, the one where i did it in grade 8 are still in my teacher's computer, and i still can't contact her yet.

and also, these 2 poems, boost my english mark to 90%:rolleyes:

legendaryhero90
01-10-2008, 11:45 PM
http://youtube.com/watch?v=L3G70YlKlho

all i got to say...

Jackrawl
01-12-2008, 03:06 AM
http://youtube.com/watch?v=L3G70YlKlho

all i got to say...

I'm going to find out where you live.

R0b0t1
01-12-2008, 05:03 AM
Chuck Norris does not know love. He just knows not killing.