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Dervish
01-22-2009, 05:09 PM
New thing.

Alot of people said that there wasn't enough color in my work.

Here's something dark but with color :).

I really want to make a competiton with you TViYH (if you read this).

http://i420.photobucket.com/albums/pp281/Purevil_X/PS3copy.jpg

Took ~1 hour 20 minutes~ .

And here's something else I did :

VERY BASIC.

http://i420.photobucket.com/albums/pp281/Purevil_X/SRLSIG.jpg

Please rate [THE FIRST ONE]

/10

:)

Floor66
01-22-2009, 05:15 PM
6/10
Not better then ur first one. It lacks something... The effects you use are all the same, circular stuff + some brushing.

^Constructive Criticism!

Dervish
01-22-2009, 05:27 PM
Only brushing was the "smoking" stuff on the outlines :rolleyes:.

Thanks, atleast some constructive criticism :).

Do you have ANY idea of what it lacks ? If so please tell me ^^. I'd love to improve my work.

Zyt3x
01-22-2009, 08:26 PM
The 1st one (the one that is mostly cyan);
I did not like it at all... Sorry, but its too much noise.. The colors does not match and it hurts to llok at it (I hope you dont misunderstand me, it is not awful but the colors does not match)
I give it a 2/10.. :(

The secound one is GREAT, I really LOVE that one, nothing more to say :)

Dervish
01-22-2009, 08:28 PM
Loool Zytex! :)

Seconds one is simply text with a gradient over it which took ~5 minutes xD.

First one took alot of time, but its true that the colors do not match.

But if I left it without contrast/sharpening/flensing/rendering it would be black and white :).

Zyt3x
01-22-2009, 08:30 PM
Seconds one is simply text with a gradient over it which took ~5 minutes xD.
Yeah I know, I have Photoshop too :p
But I still love it :)

Dervish
01-22-2009, 08:35 PM
http://i420.photobucket.com/albums/pp281/Purevil_X/Zytexcopy.jpg


:p

corn77
01-23-2009, 02:45 AM
hmm. I love the idea of it, but the colors throw away the cool effects. They just dont go together. They scream at me, in a bad way. :-(. I have trouble with colors too. Dx. Good TRY! 5/10. I like the Dr. D Dervish. Cool font :-)

Orbital
01-23-2009, 05:24 AM
7/10

Good attempt but I think you rely too much on brush work... try duplicating the brushed layer and try change certain parts by blurring or smudging...

anonymity
01-23-2009, 05:58 AM
I think that the random and wild in your picture is in heavy conflict with your perfect circles... your picture tries to set the defined and the undefined..... you can't do that... ... have defined points... in your picture and go with it from there..... or you can have undefined points ... and try and define your picture from that.... and the color is a little to much... other than that.... it looks pretty good...

Buckleyindahouse
01-23-2009, 09:56 AM
2nd one looks like mines but nice.

Dervish
01-23-2009, 06:25 PM
Got the Idea from you Buckley, but I didn't spend more than 5 minutes on it ^^.

Now :

COLOR OR NO COLOR ? xD !!!



Oh and :

Only brushing was the grudgy stuff on the outlines.