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Moore Peace(Not a Typo)
This poem is from school from when my teacher (Ms. Moore) wasn't verry good with keeping the room under control.
Moore Peace
Code:
Should I compare her class
to a day in hell?
I try to pass
but distraction is all that I can spell.
I try to stay immune
to the dumb things they say
will this class end soon?
I hear the insults fag and gay
our poor teacher is so upset.
I can tell this class is a headache
she deserves an "I'm sorry" basket
but i do not have the materials to make
the students in her class treat her like spit.
We're all very lucky that she doesn't quit.
Of course I got a 100 and she told me that I was "brave" with some of the words I wrote on my paper.:duh:
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How old are you? You spelt hear wrong, this isnt very 100% worthy , sorry to say, but it isnt.
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i am 14(but i was 13 at the time) and it's not supposed to completely rhyme because it's called a sonnet poem the patern goes like this.
a
b
a
b
c
d
c
d
e
f
e
f
g
g
you see?
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I try to stay immune c
d
will this class end soon? c?
I can tell this class is a headache f
but i do not have the materials to make f?
spit & quit dont rhyme
they dont rhyme into the form but nice try.
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im-mune, sune (how it sounds)
head-ake, m-ake
sp-it, kw-it
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o btw i think this kid has a crush on his teach
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jeez give him a break, I think it's pretty cool.
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actualy quite a good poem
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Originally Posted by
kaustav_002
It didn't rhyme...:(
Poems don't have to rhyme. Look at all the great poets... there are multitudes of different styles.