Hi guys I just touched base with my voice-over artist whos based out in ATL; He does a lot of Natgeo docs, corp style V.O work, etc.
I had him do a V.O for a soon to be advertisement video for SRL.
Please give me your thoughts of the wording, etc; What should be added and or removed.
All credit goes to wiz. I ripped the text from a post he posted just re-worded somethings, and changed the order of what was said. I take no credit for the script text; I'll be editing up a series of RS videos, and Simba script videos and compile a well rounded :60 commerical based off the content I have following with the V.O in the background..
https://www.onlinefilefolder.com/pub...h=muK5FK0IvjL1
Here is the V.O hosted, please do not DL & edit V.O as I own all rights to the content.

