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    Default Website for Brother

    Made my little brother a website for his clan on Clash of Clans, he's only 10. Took 5ish minutes to throw together with Webflow though I found it substantially less customisable than Wix. It's nothing special but it gets the job done! (:
    World Rush - Clash of Clans
    PS. Yes the background image is our beloved RS
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    I want to get into website building but I have nil imagination and have no idea what I would create one about :')

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    That URL . Looks alright. Your contact page is an apply page so should change it "Apply" instead of "Contact".

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    Quote Originally Posted by GetHyper View Post
    I want to get into website building but I have nil imagination and have no idea what I would create one about :')
    Getting started may seem daunting but I recommend using a site like wix that lets you learn to create without knowledge of language. After you get your feet wet and feel comfortable I suggest moving onto one like webflow that allows you to see the source code and edit it. From there you'd definitely want to start learning a web dev language that suits your needs such as javascript. Every language is easy once you learn the logic... basically!

    Quote Originally Posted by Chris! View Post
    That URL . Looks alright. Your contact page is an apply page so should change it "Apply" instead of "Contact".
    Well spotted, haha.
    I feel a sense of cool 12 year old as I say that URL.
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    Quote Originally Posted by srlMW View Post
    Well spotted, haha.
    I feel a sense of cool 12 year old as I say that URL.
    'tis a gross URL . Also the logo is weird when it's striked out like it is now... might just be me but I don't like it.

    "When you join World Rush you are not joining a clan but a family that help each other"
    "When you join World Rush you are not joining a clan, but a family that help each other"

    We at World Rush have built upon a strong active community with constant conversations
    Could be worded better.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Chris! View Post
    'tis a gross URL . Also the logo is weird when it's striked out like it is now... might just be me but I don't like it.



    "When you join World Rush you are not joining a clan, but a family that help each other"



    Could be worded better.
    You're a tough critic @Chris!; Definitely much tougher than my little brother!
    Cheers for the feedback though, I do appreciate it.
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    Quote Originally Posted by srlMW View Post
    You're a tough critic @Chris!; Definitely much tougher than my little brother!
    Cheers for the feedback though, I do appreciate it.
    You need constructive feedback or it won't be improved... .

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    Quote Originally Posted by Chris! View Post
    "When you join World Rush you are not joining a clan, but a family that help each other"
    "When you join World Rush you are not joining a clan, but a family that helps each other"

    If you're going to fix a minor mistake, fix the major one too

    I would also add "...not just joining..." because you are actually joining a clan.

    There is an optional comma after "World Rush" as well.

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    Citrus, I think you're on to something there.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Citrus View Post
    "When you join World Rush you are not joining a clan, but a family that helps each other"

    If you're going to fix a minor mistake, fix the major one too

    I would also add "...not just joining..." because you are actually joining a clan.

    There is an optional comma after "World Rush" as well.
    Good pick up, I'll be honest in saying I didn't pick that one up .

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    It bothers me that these are not equal length

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lucidity View Post
    It bothers me that these are not equal length
    Added in some extra words just for you... at first I liked it but then I always desire to please o' Great Lucidity!
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