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    Moore Peace(Not a Typo)

    This poem is from school from when my teacher (Ms. Moore) wasn't verry good with keeping the room under control.

    Moore Peace

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    Should I compare her class 
    to a day in hell?
    I try to pass
    but distraction is all that I can spell.
    I try to stay immune 
    to the dumb things they say
    will this class end soon?
    I hear the insults fag and gay
    our poor teacher is so upset.
    I can tell this class is a headache
    she deserves an "I'm sorry" basket
    but i do not have the materials to make
    the students in her class treat her like spit.
    We're all very lucky that she doesn't quit.
    Of course I got a 100 and she told me that I was "brave" with some of the words I wrote on my paper.

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    How old are you? You spelt hear wrong, this isnt very 100% worthy , sorry to say, but it isnt.

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    It didn't rhyme...






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    i am 14(but i was 13 at the time) and it's not supposed to completely rhyme because it's called a sonnet poem the patern goes like this.

    a
    b
    a
    b
    c
    d
    c
    d
    e
    f
    e
    f
    g
    g

    you see?

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    I try to stay immune c
    d
    will this class end soon? c?

    I can tell this class is a headache f
    but i do not have the materials to make f?

    spit & quit dont rhyme

    they dont rhyme into the form but nice try.






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    im-mune, sune (how it sounds)

    head-ake, m-ake

    sp-it, kw-it

    ....



    o btw i think this kid has a crush on his teach

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    jeez give him a break, I think it's pretty cool.

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    Quote Originally Posted by kaustav_002 View Post
    It didn't rhyme...
    Poems don't have to rhyme. Look at all the great poets... there are multitudes of different styles.
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