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    Like A Hero Still I Rise


    Indecipherable, undefeated....

    ^^^Look above is that the way you want me to be?
    That secrete heroine who’d let you die in your own fantasy

    I’d be the one who’d go through lifes like the bad and the good
    Make you fall in despair to save you later like only could

    Imagine...

    I’d let you dream with storys of my troubled existance
    Here I’d fight and always win with endured resistance

    Mantaining vulnerability while fighting seclusion
    Are those the storys you want me to feed your ilusion

    Could I be the perfect breath of air you inhale?
    The perfect full-version to your fary-tail’

    No...

    Truely, I’m just a blanc tortuous comparison to your ideal
    And I could never make you believe more than it’s already real

    It’s a sad irony I can’t be your “all” too
    Cause all i ever wanted i got it from you

    I’m just your baby and I wont be the saint or the devil, either
    Cause since your mine, and I’m your poet, your my favourite reader

    So hush....

    Look at me, sometimes reality does beat imagination
    I’m already a person molded by our starnge relation

    Writting you this was a blessing cause it made me realise
    That everytime I fall atleast Like a Hero Still I Rise

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    Good Poem.
    Great use of words.
    Great point to, good job.

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    What a great poem. Owns like almost all of this whole poetry section. xP

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    ya i see kane has taken up mostly all of this though.ill be back and posting poetry now and for a while more.i have a lot i can post right now lol.been gone a long time got me some new poems ready to post

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