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    Default love poems....i did these right after my break up...

    orignal link is from my facebook http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?pi...4&id=508683841
    it has some crappy copy right at the back, and if you serch it on google, you can prolly still find the background of the image (i've edited abit)


    I did the black side and my bud alex did the other side (he was in love..)

    This is the words if you can't see clearly (red-black)
    I believe that love is___________I believe that love is

    Long relationship______________Lies that hurt
    Over due crush_______________Only few survive
    Very caring__________________Very tough to get through
    Ever lasting__________________Ever lasting pain (trust me...)

    You'd never be happier_________Year's i've wasted on you
    On the longest day of my life_____Ouch..the pain inside my heart
    Undying love__________________Until the end of my life


    i have an other one, but i need to ask my grade 8 teacher for it..
    Oh Hai Dar

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    http://youtube.com/watch?v=d_zw3XHJR5k

    Just joking. It's pretty good.
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    Decent for 8th grade. However, in a poem describing what one believes love is, I didn't like how Alex used the word "love" in the last line. How can "undying love" describe love?
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    i dunno why lol..

    and this poem i did it in grade 9, the one where i did it in grade 8 are still in my teacher's computer, and i still can't contact her yet.

    and also, these 2 poems, boost my english mark to 90%
    Oh Hai Dar

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