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    Default Love is but flames

    Love is but flames.
    In the wind it wanes,
    In the still it blazes,
    Powerful protected,
    Foolish moths attracted.

    Love is but flames.
    For the blind it shines,
    For the bitter it thaws,
    Numbing when it's departed,
    Somber when it's deceased.

    Love is but flames.
    Love is but games,
    It has to end.
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    P.S. I know it's a dodgy rhyming scheme, but had to base it on a poets and I can't remember who

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    I like it!
    The substance is there (though it would be better with a more complicated rhyme scheme). =]
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    The poem was supposed to be setup with long lines that flow with loose rhymes to make it seem like a mixture of a story and a song. I chose to use endings with 's' s to make it flow better with the hard 'd' s at the end of the stanza to provide a subtle contrast. It was all well thought out, but alas it was school work so it didn't stop me from getting bored quickly and thus giving up
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    Wow...
    I didn't spot that at all. Call me blind haha.
    You're right, it was well thought out. Do you remember what poet did that?
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    Nah, it was a good year to a year and a half ago, so it's a bit foggy (only got the rhyming scheme after going through notes). Think his name was something like Harry Wynds though or was it Mary Wynds? Was it even Wynds? I have no idea and will just keep on saying random names until it jogs my memory...
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    Quote Originally Posted by mixster05 View Post
    Nah, it was a good year to a year and a half ago, so it's a bit foggy (only got the rhyming scheme after going through notes). Think his name was something like Harry Wynds though or was it Mary Wynds? Was it even Wynds? I have no idea and will just keep on saying random names until it jogs my memory...
    My name is Harry


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    Quote Originally Posted by Hy71194 View Post
    My name is Harry
    Hugo, rofl.

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    I was refering to
    Think his name was something like Harry Wynds


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    I've been thread-jacked
    Ahwell.
    Hi, My name's Bob and I'm an alcoholic.. or a paramedic - I forget.
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