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    some poem about bein rich =/

    Everyone wants to make it to the top
    No one wants to window shop
    Everyone wants to be rich
    Not stuck in the poverty ditch

    Everyone's goal is the same
    To gain cash and fame
    Methods may vary
    For the top has more than one key

    Many may try
    Doing so, many may die
    But they'll be satisfied
    In honor they died

    ..about racism

    Racism is in the air
    Using slurs with no care
    Or consideration for others
    Thinkin only of his same color brothers

    Look at Kramer
    What a fucking lamer
    Using the N-word
    Dumber than a fkin bird

    Peeps be commitin hate crimes
    Sayin Jews love pennies and dimes
    I kno its a fact you be statin
    But you ain't gotta be hatin

    Peeps talk bout the Chinese
    Sayin we neva got lower than B's
    Damn right we all straight A
    We don't skip, we stay

    But there ain't no need to be racist
    It only brings to your face a fist
    Though racism may be humor
    Let them know it a joke for sure

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shuttleu View Post
    very good

    did you think up of these on the spot or did you make them a while ago?

    ~shut
    Made them a while ago.

    Heres one that I made during this post..

    Sweat and blood covered the field
    Heavier and heavier the sword I wield
    Hope had seemed gone and sealed
    Despair hit as another life was yielded

    We had angered something beyond our might
    Foolishly we shot it down from its flight
    Visible only were that of his glaring red eyes in the night
    Its fireballs able to melt even a rune kite

    We intended to hunt the KBD
    Although it seems that it is now hunting me
    The dragon was as persistent as the sea
    It seemed impossible to even flee

    The dragon shot another fireball
    It killed our friend wielding the granite maul
    Loudly we screamed our battle call
    Then suddenly we heard a fall

    The dragon had been slain
    The final blow was lain
    not by us... the loot we did not gain
    Our kill stolen.. our deaths in vain

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    Quote Originally Posted by Pikachu4 View Post
    Made them a while ago.

    Heres one that I made during this post..

    Sweat and blood covered the field
    Heavier and heavier the sword I wield
    Hope had seemed gone and sealed
    Despair hit as another life was yielded

    We had angered something beyond our might
    Foolishly we shot it down from its flight
    Visible only were that of his glaring red eyes in the night
    Its fireballs able to melt even a rune kite

    We intended to hunt the KBD
    Although it seems that it is now hunting me
    The dragon was as persistent as the sea
    It seemed impossible to even flee

    The dragon shot another fireball
    It killed our friend wielding the granite maul
    Loudly we screamed our battle call
    Then suddenly we heard a fall

    The dragon had been slain
    The final blow was lain
    not by us... the loot we did not gain
    Our kill stolen.. our deaths in vain
    very good but it sounds like it should have a couple more lines to finish it off

    ~shut

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    I thought it was a fit ending :/

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    on the third poem add
    im stuck on my main
    -with nothing but a d-chain

    lol

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    I like hentai.

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    but whats that gotta do with kbd hunting? =/

    was supposed to be like.. very detailed but yet very vague

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