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    Default A couple of poems i wrote (love, hate and rate it)

    well here is the first one.....

    knowing that there's no chance at all
    hoping i don't go over the edge and fall
    wishing i could just find a way
    I'd remind you just how much your loved everyday
    I'll wake up waiting to see your beautiful smile
    not wanting to get out of bed for a while
    realizing i was just dreaming away
    now, just trying to keep these feelings at bay
    becuase my heart is broke in two
    and the only one who can fix it is you

    and the second one.....

    when im with you time goes by way to fast
    wishing that tonight will always last
    youre perfect in every little way
    it doesnt matter what other people say
    giving it all just to be with you
    knowing we will love each other no matter what we do
    i just hope that we dont crash and burn
    or even make a small wrong turn
    you are someone that ill never forget
    and being with you is somthing ill never regret
    no matter how much we fight,
    ill always know that we'll be alright
    before i go i have to tell you goodnight dear,
    and just remember i love you and ill always be here.

    Please leave comments and tell me what you think

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    Keep it at scripting, please
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    awww.....











    JK but idk how to script and everytime i try to learn RS updates with some crazy update and completely screws everything up AND all my accounts were banned

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    Wired, these are very good!

    Only thing is that you could capitalize a bit more, although I fully understand if it is supposed to be that way.

    Anyway, I liked them. Verry good, indeed.


    @Creampie: stfu neeb. <----- LOOK I WAS JOKING OMFG


    Edit: Sorry hemppie, forgot the "".

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    Quote Originally Posted by EvilChicken! View Post
    Wired, these are very good!

    Only thing is that you could capitalize a bit more, although I fully understand if it is supposed to be that way.

    Anyway, I liked them. Verry good, indeed.


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    U almost make me cry

    Sorry, they aren't that bad

    They are even worse
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    yea i know i need to stanzanize it lol (stanzas) i just sit there and write them and usually dont have time to make it all pretty becuase if i try ill lose what im trying to write cuase ill forget lol but thanks. I thought about getting my poems published but i usually lose my poems becuase either i lose the paper or my brother screws up the computer and i have to format the drive and forget theyre on there

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    I like the poems themselves, very well-written... but I HATE love poems in general, mostly because I haven't been laid in way too long.

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    thanks!

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    Very... moving. *sob* I started crying halfway through thinking of how many girls I've dejected and how they must have felt...

    Now I'm pissed at you for making me so emotional Naww... jk. It's good. Extremely good. Reminds me of when I was 10 years old and had my first luuuvee

    It's been a while... but I'm BACK!!!

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