First poem. Take it easy with the criticism, I did this in 50 seconds and didn't really have time to bother with metaphors and the deeper heavier stuff. Just freeflow.Code:It's been 50 days and nights We've been through several fights Nothings left to say I just want to end this fray Fuck all those things you said Because none of them were true What, do ya think I'm mad? You just haven't got a clue Yeah, humanity can sometimes be moronic but that's no need to get all disharmonic with the world around ya, you know? Don't always go with the flow So I gotta tell ya, I had a good time Take this easy, go read a girly zine Just disappear out the door, I can't stand the sight of you no more. You make me rather sick, just debased on chick flicks There's no real character in you I won't keep you any longer.




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but, its better than what i could do
