Nice tutorial, thanks for taking the time =)
Just some things I noticed, hope they help:

Originally Posted by
poopy2177
STEP 2:getting started
Ok once you are done with tut island go to varrok and sell your runes at rune store and other crap you get at general store with this you should be able to buy full iron.Now head down to chickens eather kill chickens to level 20 str or just auto with forefeather.(you can colect feathers but its really little gp)
You're going to want to do either the stronghold of security or the stronghold of player safety first, (I recommend both). This give you a some of the best gloves in f2p and the best boots, but more importantly it gives you 20k. With this 20k you should buy a few different scimitars at the grand exchange, (iron, mithril maybe even addy), and a strength amulet. You should also buy full iron, and a cheap cape. You will be low level, so make sure to get some fish right outside these two strongholds, high-level power fishers will give you inventories of free cooked ones. Also "varrok" is spelled "varrock", doesn't really matter though, just fyi.

Originally Posted by
poopy2177
STEP 4:attack!
Attack not as in pvp attack but train attack on monks/rats you have a choice here kinda train it 1-30 definetly and get a addy scimmy or you could go all the way from 1-40 for rune scimmy.
Your going to want to level strength and attack together, not get 45 str while still having 1 att. You can choose the optimum leveling ratio for yourself, but I would keep your str level a little bit higher then your att, (fastest leveling). And of course stop leveling att at 40. NO MORE, (and no less).

Originally Posted by
poopy2177
STEP 5:your new home!45-70 str!(holy crap)
holy crap is right this takes maybe a month but its worth it trust me well anyways your new home is the stronghold of secuirity level 12 minotaurs.You need lots of food here so eather if you collected all the feathers sell and buy food but i would fish,wc,or mine for gp (i did fishing because everyone wc's or mine's and theres less randoms)but its up to you oh and btw once you get 50-60 str you should definetly have 40 attack and a rune scimmy.
You may want to level your fishing before you do this, as you can fish at the convenient fishing place right outside the stronghold of security. Alternatively you could train on a popular/crowded world, and unload those power-fishers, (free food ^^).

Originally Posted by
poopy2177
60-whatever:fish lobbys at karajama takes a long time to bank but gets good gp
The fastest leveling will be at the barbarian village. That is argulably the fastest fishing technique in f2p.

Originally Posted by
poopy2177
(sorry cant remember name its almost 1 so i am tired)
al-kharid

Originally Posted by
poopy2177
STEP 9:41-60 i would say:This requirs quite a bit of gp but omg you would be astoinded how fast you can do this in buy alot of death runes as much as possible and have crumble undead requirments now heres a really cool place to train that you still hit really high and not many people are there just some range pures you get to go back home yay!
It doesn't need to cost you a gp. Well not much anyway. All you have to do is, go to fist of guthix, wearing full armor, (doesn't matter which, bronze or iron), and a normal staff, (not elemental, too much mage bonus). Once your mage bonus is low enough, (i think it's -65), you will never hit, with any spell. Just autocast on your target, and do not care about rating. Just lose the matches, and get looots of mage experiance, for free! (free runes are provided). This method can be used at lower mage levels too, not just 41+.
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