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    Well I made a Two Tone Poem and it is pathetic so i posted it under pathetic poetryIt doesn't have to rhyme//

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             Part of me is glorious yellow-
               lively and blissful
               springy and bubbly,
               Daring to do anything that heads my way.
             On the inside I am something else,
               mint green, like a lonely turtle-
               jittery and anxious,
               timid and wary,
               expecting danger at every turn.
             The best and the worst,
               and yet they complete me!

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    ??? I don't think I quite get your poem, but uhh, good job I guees.

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    I think that it actually is a good poem.

    If that really is how you feel, then I might somewhat understand.


    .. but why turtle? D:
    Are they often lonely?

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    yeah "slow" people are lonely and this isn't about me it is describing a friend actually...

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    randomness rules!!!!

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