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    Default A Scorned Child

    Its Kinda Dark but thats more my style tell me what you think:

    Standing here i ask myself what happened to your plan
    to raise me to understand
    what it means to be a man
    and provide for my fam
    but you destroyed my fragile young mind with a swing of your hand
    now everyone talks about this day in age
    how we should mind our own business
    HOW
    when im so full of rage
    my mind is like an animal fighting to get out of his cage
    this is one time i wont just turn my cheek
    i refuse to close my mouth and not speak
    As i approach the tears fall as i see my mother laying there lifeless
    dad please i beg you let mom be
    I can smell the budweiser fresh on your breath
    but to me it smells like the cold hearted man of death
    you turn and face me now bringing your constant barrage of blows in my direction
    as my mother slowly wakes she sees the beating im taking
    she runs to my side with her hands still shaking
    she succeeds and his attention is brought to her
    while i look through bloodstained eyes at a blur
    ive made the decision this is the last time
    someone will be hurt from your bloodline
    i run out of the room in a daze to find a weapon
    i remember in the basement my dad keeps his smith & wesson
    now i ask myself the question
    CAN I GO THROUGH WITH THIS?
    because if i dont i will surely die from my fathers fist
    then i hear a loud HELP ME SOMEONE yell
    thats it my mind shuts off and my rage starts to swell
    i grab the gun and return to the room
    as my mind yells faster or she will surely die soon
    As i hold the gun up i think of that happy bride and groom
    the hammer cocks back as my mind consumes what im about to do
    I whisper to my self Goodbye dad & I love you
    and with that i fire that fatal shot
    the one that would finally make the pain stop
    now i have to be a witness and explain to the cop
    why it was i had to shoot my own pop
    good night everyone im going to bed now.i posted a few and ill post the rest tomorrow.and your probley thinking why im getting them done so fast.why that is is becuase its saved onto my usb flash drive so im copy/pasting and then keeping them on my flash drive.well good night

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    Dam ur into poetry every post is from u its prety good tho
    good work
    XD

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