begin
ConstructiveCritisism := 'Make the text and the spirals and the dude blend in to the background a bit more.';
Wait(500);
Writeln('7/10!');
end.
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Nub, doesn't compile.
Is it just one big c4d and a render and text?
It looks pretty simple but it's a good start.
If you make the c4d look more like your render, and add some blending, it will look much better. The text kinda stands out too much. I'm a fan of simple text.
If you used a different c4d/background, I think it would fit better with the colourful render.
The spirals are the pen tool, the c4d is a, well c4d. I needed a dark background to bring out the glow, and that was one of the only colors that worked for the glow but didn't mess with the render
Last edited by Bionicle; 10-14-2009 at 12:26 AM.
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Colored http://planetrenders.net/renders/dis...php?pos=-17179 with render on it.
I will hate ! Except for your pen tooling![]()
Pen tooling looks good.
Rest is kinda... simple...
BTW Bionicle you still missed a S-C![]()
Had a diffren't background, but was extremely ugly
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