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    rate my poem!!! scale of 1 thru 10 plz

    poetry is but a thought
    something that can be bught
    even if you got a penny
    it might be plenty
    for poetry is but a thought

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    cool ppl do poems
    just like bart!

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    penny dosent ryme with plenty. Thats the only real fault i can find.

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    He also spelled bought wrong. Overall maybe 5/10 (so short)

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    Quote Originally Posted by WhoCares357 View Post
    He also spelled bought wrong. Overall maybe 5/10 (so short)
    my english teacher would never accept that!!
    1/10
    grade: F-


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