rate my poem!!! scale of 1 thru 10 plz![]()
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poetry is but a thought
something that can be bught
even if you got a penny
it might be plenty
for poetry is but a thought
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cool ppl do poems![]()
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just like bart!![]()
rate my poem!!! scale of 1 thru 10 plz![]()
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poetry is but a thought
something that can be bught
even if you got a penny
it might be plenty
for poetry is but a thought
_________________________
cool ppl do poems![]()
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just like bart!![]()
penny dosent ryme with plenty. Thats the only real fault i can find.
Accept that the waters around you have grown.
He also spelled bought wrong. Overall maybe 5/10 (so short)
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