Results 1 to 11 of 11

Thread: problem with design -.-

  1. #1
    Join Date
    Feb 2012
    Location
    DON'T PM ME ASKING FOR STUFF
    Posts
    2,170
    Mentioned
    38 Post(s)
    Quoted
    423 Post(s)

    Default problem with design -.-

    Hey guys..

    So I made a website for a independent feature film... I kinda messed up :P


    I don't know how to add content to it without it looking crap :/

    Front page:
    http://lost-childhood.co.uk/

    Pages with Content:
    http://lost-childhood.co.uk/send_form_email.php

    I don't have any creative ideas in my head...

  2. #2
    Join Date
    Oct 2008
    Location
    C:\Simba\Includes\
    Posts
    7,566
    Mentioned
    19 Post(s)
    Quoted
    180 Post(s)

    Default

    What is the look you're trying to get? That would help
    Away for awhile, life is keeping me busy. | Want to get my attention in a thread? @Kyle Undefined; me.
    { MSI Phoenix || SRL Stats Sigs || Paste || Scripts || Quotes || Graphics }

    When posting a bug, please post debug! Help us, help you!

    I would love to change the world, but they won't give me the source code. || To be the best, you've got to beat the rest. || Logic never changes, just the syntax.
    If you PM me with a stupid question or one listed in FAQ, or about a script that is not mine, I will NOT respond.


    SRL is a Library of routines made by the SRL community written for the Program Simba. We produce Scripts for the game Runescape.


  3. #3
    Join Date
    Feb 2012
    Location
    DON'T PM ME ASKING FOR STUFF
    Posts
    2,170
    Mentioned
    38 Post(s)
    Quoted
    423 Post(s)

    Default

    Well I think I've grasped the look, it's a social realism film Interlinked with with a stereotype of the demonized working class chav.
    But it's extremely dark... Depressing...

    Helpful? ^.^

  4. #4
    Join Date
    Oct 2008
    Location
    C:\Simba\Includes\
    Posts
    7,566
    Mentioned
    19 Post(s)
    Quoted
    180 Post(s)

    Default

    Do you want the text to be centered on the page? Or what? That's what I meant, stuff like that
    Away for awhile, life is keeping me busy. | Want to get my attention in a thread? @Kyle Undefined; me.
    { MSI Phoenix || SRL Stats Sigs || Paste || Scripts || Quotes || Graphics }

    When posting a bug, please post debug! Help us, help you!

    I would love to change the world, but they won't give me the source code. || To be the best, you've got to beat the rest. || Logic never changes, just the syntax.
    If you PM me with a stupid question or one listed in FAQ, or about a script that is not mine, I will NOT respond.


    SRL is a Library of routines made by the SRL community written for the Program Simba. We produce Scripts for the game Runescape.


  5. #5
    Join Date
    Feb 2012
    Location
    Florida
    Posts
    193
    Mentioned
    1 Post(s)
    Quoted
    6 Post(s)

    Default

    Did you use ?
    HTML Code:
    <style type="text/css">
    margin: auto;
    </style>
    That might work to center things, you might also have to set the width of certain elements.

  6. #6
    Join Date
    Feb 2012
    Location
    DON'T PM ME ASKING FOR STUFF
    Posts
    2,170
    Mentioned
    38 Post(s)
    Quoted
    423 Post(s)

    Default

    Quote Originally Posted by Kyle Undefined View Post
    Do you want the text to be centered on the page? Or what? That's what I meant, stuff like that
    Thats the thing! I don't know :P I need suggestions

  7. #7
    Join Date
    Oct 2008
    Location
    C:\Simba\Includes\
    Posts
    7,566
    Mentioned
    19 Post(s)
    Quoted
    180 Post(s)

    Default

    I'll go through it later today and give you my feedback
    Away for awhile, life is keeping me busy. | Want to get my attention in a thread? @Kyle Undefined; me.
    { MSI Phoenix || SRL Stats Sigs || Paste || Scripts || Quotes || Graphics }

    When posting a bug, please post debug! Help us, help you!

    I would love to change the world, but they won't give me the source code. || To be the best, you've got to beat the rest. || Logic never changes, just the syntax.
    If you PM me with a stupid question or one listed in FAQ, or about a script that is not mine, I will NOT respond.


    SRL is a Library of routines made by the SRL community written for the Program Simba. We produce Scripts for the game Runescape.


  8. #8
    Join Date
    Feb 2012
    Location
    DON'T PM ME ASKING FOR STUFF
    Posts
    2,170
    Mentioned
    38 Post(s)
    Quoted
    423 Post(s)

    Default

    Quote Originally Posted by Kyle Undefined View Post
    I'll go through it later today and give you my feedback
    Thanks mate! much appreciated

  9. #9
    Join Date
    Oct 2008
    Location
    C:\Simba\Includes\
    Posts
    7,566
    Mentioned
    19 Post(s)
    Quoted
    180 Post(s)

    Default

    Not gonna lie, the trailer on the home page looks pretty shweet.

    Homepage Feedback:
    1. I would make that background image take up the whole screen, keep the background black, but using CSS you can make it resize according to the resolution.

    2. Make the trailer video bigger and center it on the page. It's hard to get a good visual of it when it's so small, making it 800px wide would help with the video.

    3. Lose the gray background for the text at the bottom, just have it overlay the background image and it will look fine.

    4. Add social sharing buttons somewhere on the page.

    Content Page Feedback:
    1. Same as the homepage but minus the trailer video.

    2. Make the dark gray background that sits behind the text transparent, and center it on the page.

    3. Above the content, have the page title (Contact Information, for example) above the content box. Have it in the same font as the "Lost ChildHood" font you have on the homepage, but not quite as big.

    That's the feedback that I can see for now.
    Away for awhile, life is keeping me busy. | Want to get my attention in a thread? @Kyle Undefined; me.
    { MSI Phoenix || SRL Stats Sigs || Paste || Scripts || Quotes || Graphics }

    When posting a bug, please post debug! Help us, help you!

    I would love to change the world, but they won't give me the source code. || To be the best, you've got to beat the rest. || Logic never changes, just the syntax.
    If you PM me with a stupid question or one listed in FAQ, or about a script that is not mine, I will NOT respond.


    SRL is a Library of routines made by the SRL community written for the Program Simba. We produce Scripts for the game Runescape.


  10. #10
    Join Date
    Feb 2012
    Location
    DON'T PM ME ASKING FOR STUFF
    Posts
    2,170
    Mentioned
    38 Post(s)
    Quoted
    423 Post(s)

    Default

    Quote Originally Posted by Kyle Undefined View Post
    Not gonna lie, the trailer on the home page looks pretty shweet.

    Homepage Feedback:
    1. I would make that background image take up the whole screen, keep the background black, but using CSS you can make it resize according to the resolution.

    2. Make the trailer video bigger and center it on the page. It's hard to get a good visual of it when it's so small, making it 800px wide would help with the video.

    3. Lose the gray background for the text at the bottom, just have it overlay the background image and it will look fine.

    4. Add social sharing buttons somewhere on the page.

    Content Page Feedback:
    1. Same as the homepage but minus the trailer video.

    2. Make the dark gray background that sits behind the text transparent, and center it on the page.

    3. Above the content, have the page title (Contact Information, for example) above the content box. Have it in the same font as the "Lost ChildHood" font you have on the homepage, but not quite as big.

    That's the feedback that I can see for now.
    That trailer is another film This one I'm working with the director on has a bigger budget though started at £300k << ££ not $$ just to clarify

    and I tried to stretched CSS but it didn't really work because I still didn't know what to make the background. Have you got any examples?

  11. #11
    Join Date
    Feb 2012
    Location
    Somewhere, over the rainbow...
    Posts
    2,272
    Mentioned
    3 Post(s)
    Quoted
    45 Post(s)

    Default

    On the stroy page, I realised a very small typo:
    What about the strange neighbour across the road, is he watching them? does he have a child captive in the 3rd floor Attic?
    The 'd' after the question mark needs to be a capital 'D'. Small typo, but looks unprofessional.

    As for the homepage, I'd drag the Background Image to the bottom of the page rather than leaving it black.


    Otherwise, very nice!

Thread Information

Users Browsing this Thread

There are currently 1 users browsing this thread. (0 members and 1 guests)

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •