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    Default I actually wrote this.

    Its for school.

    But given theres a section I might as well post it, Its supposed to be a Shakespearian Sonnet. Give me a rating

    Anyway, for all those who care.

    Here is my sonnet. And no, it is not actually for anyone.



    Letting Go.
    By Taigastyle

    Those delightful, blissful moments we shared
    Those moments in life which had no despair
    To nothing else could our love be compared
    To say it would end now, no one would dare

    We said forever, you can not deny
    I wish you would tell me, why did you leave?
    I wanted a chance, just to say goodbye
    But why you left, I still can not perceive

    Was it something else? Just someone better?
    What could it have been, Looks? Money? Power?
    When away, would he write you a letter
    If you were in trouble would he cower?

    All this clutter will be erased by dawn
    I now know I must surrender what’s gone

    No copying.
    Sex from Fagex (Hacked atm)

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    Very Deep... A Fallen Feeling to it. Much of it penetrates your mind with the truth, because many of us know where you are coming from. Keep on writing, you are strong in it.
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    Don't bump three-month-old threads. . .Reply to someone who just posted something. Such as my sucky story :P

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    For a leecher, this is pretty damn good.

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    Don't gravedig

    07-05-2007, 11:09 PM


    Quote Originally Posted by Rubix View Post
    Quote Originally Posted by Dan Cardin View Post
    you ought to listen to Mr. Klean...he's magical!
    this.

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    Quote Originally Posted by mr.klean View Post
    Don't gravedig

    07-05-2007, 11:09 PM
    Speak up, I have bad hearing.

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    Great poem and i don't care if someone says that this is grave dig.. This is deep mate and good one

    ~Home

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    Quote Originally Posted by Home View Post
    Great poem and i don't care if someone says that this is grave dig.. This is deep mate and good one

    ~Home
    +1
    and like Tim0suprem0 said

    for a leecher this is very good
    well done although i dont think he will ever read it

    ~shut

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