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    Hi guys I just touched base with my voice-over artist whos based out in ATL; He does a lot of Natgeo docs, corp style V.O work, etc.


    I had him do a V.O for a soon to be advertisement video for SRL.

    Please give me your thoughts of the wording, etc; What should be added and or removed.

    All credit goes to wiz. I ripped the text from a post he posted just re-worded somethings, and changed the order of what was said. I take no credit for the script text; I'll be editing up a series of RS videos, and Simba script videos and compile a well rounded :60 commerical based off the content I have following with the V.O in the background..


    https://www.onlinefilefolder.com/pub...h=muK5FK0IvjL1


    Here is the V.O hosted, please do not DL & edit V.O as I own all rights to the content.

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    editing it now, will re-upload on 2shared

    he needs to say SRL faster then S----R----L
    he mispronounces pascal...
    sounds funny saying villavu.com

    the second VO is better then his first. Although, meh... I could do better(deeper voice
    Last edited by footballjds; 07-24-2012 at 09:56 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by footballjds View Post
    editing it now, will re-upload on 2shared

    he needs to say SRL faster then S----R----L
    he mispronounces pascal...
    sounds funny saying villavu.com

    the second VO is better then his first. Although, meh... I could do better(deeper voice
    Harrr..HARRR!

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    Quote Originally Posted by footballjds View Post
    editing it now, will re-upload on 2shared

    he needs to say SRL faster then S----R----L
    he mispronounces pascal...
    sounds funny saying villavu.com

    the second VO is better then his first. Although, meh... I could do better(deeper voice
    Do you think it would sound better deeper tone? He does a fantastic deep tone voice.

    I'll have him speed up SRL; how should Pascal be pronouced?

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    I like it though. But football, if you can do it better... Come on! Do it!

    Pascal is a french name from origin afaik. It is not wrong to pronounce it as he did.
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    I sent the email over to him asking him to do a deeper verison, having SRL said faster- both SRL, Simba, Villau.com to stand out more then the rest of the words in the V.O

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    Quote Originally Posted by po2n star View Post
    Harrr..HARRR!
    haha (:

    Quote Originally Posted by po2n star View Post
    Do you think it would sound better deeper tone? He does a fantastic deep tone voice.

    I'll have him speed up SRL; how should Pascal be pronouced?
    pah-skahl
    Quote Originally Posted by masterBB View Post
    I like it though. But football, if you can do it better... Come on! Do it!

    Pascal is a french name from origin afaik. It is not wrong to pronounce it as he did.
    Idk if I can do "better". was kinda giving po2n a hard time cause i know he can take it oh, and pascal definitely has a correct pronunciation...
    http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/pascal?s=t
    Quote Originally Posted by po2n star View Post
    I sent the email over to him asking him to do a deeper verison, having SRL said faster- both SRL, Simba, Villau.com to stand out more then the rest of the words in the V.O
    Sounds good!!! i wanna hear the new version

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    Quote Originally Posted by footballjds View Post
    Idk if I can do "better". was kinda giving po2n a hard time cause i know he can take it oh, and pascal definitely has a correct pronunciation...
    http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/pascal?s=t
    Hehe, I say it at the french way. With both the A's pronounced as ball.
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    As this is mostly guy driven community (durp) would like a female VO. Would be nice to have the basics in SRL like "In random" and "Player inactive" stuff like that.
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    Very nice voice over!

    But yeh, I always thought villavu was pronounced "villa-voo" not "villa-vee-you"

    Oh well

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    Quote Originally Posted by abu_jwka View Post
    Very nice voice over!

    But yeh, I always thought villavu was pronounced "villa-voo" not "villa-vee-you"

    Oh well
    same, guess wizzup would know tho :P

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    Quote Originally Posted by abu_jwka View Post
    Very nice voice over!

    But yeh, I always thought villavu was pronounced "villa-voo" not "villa-vee-you"

    Oh well
    Same haha, know whos though :P

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    Quote Originally Posted by abu_jwka View Post
    Very nice voice over!

    But yeh, I always thought villavu was pronounced "villa-voo" not "villa-vee-you"

    Oh well
    same... at the start I thought it could possibly be villa-view but later came to my senses.

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    I'm currently reviewing the new updated VO hang lose I'll post it once I hear it.


    https://www.onlinefilefolder.com/1sZHfLjwWxv99Q


    I just sent over another email asking to change " Rune-IN-Scape " to be said " Rune-SCAPE"

    Also asked for a deeper raspier voice, with a bit of a slur on the end of SRL, and simba.



    EDIT: Now all I have to do is get SRL / Simba's Logo - is there anyone who has a the psd file or a hi-res file of the LOGO of SRL?

    I'd like to attach this in the end of the video, and if I have the PSD file I'll keep it a bottom corner icon in all the footage. Lastly I still have to compile footage but with Simba being down I don't want to run the quick-patch fix until all scripts / simba is running at 100% then I can start to pick and choose differnt scripts that really put SRL in a real spot light.
    Last edited by Jos3ph; 07-25-2012 at 12:48 AM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by po2n star View Post
    EDIT: Now all I have to do is get SRL / Simba's Logo - is there anyone who has a the psd file or a hi-res file of the LOGO of SRL?
    .
    You can just print screen and crop the logo. Or just google Simba and get a nice image

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    I thought it was pronouced: Vill-Ah-Vu

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    He did villa V-U so people hear villa, then VU so it's easier to hear and go to the web address.

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