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    Default Speech conclusion help?

    I have to write a two-three minute speech about an influention person in my life, and I am stuck at the conclusion.

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    Tell me what you think and if there is any advice on the conclusion it would be very helpful

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    That was very moving .

    Maybe after the last part about his advice sticking to you you could say something about how this changed the course of your life or something like that .

    Good luck, and thanks for sharing

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    In the conclusion you can explain how his words "have stuck with me through almost every aspect of my life" and just wrap it up from there. Overall, its good and I like it.

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    Another alternative would be putting in a quote that is meaningful to you, and probably if this was a speech in a social setting, maybe you could offer to talk to people who are experiencing what you had gone through to help them get out of such a situation themselves.

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