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    Default How is my paper?

    http://pastebin.com/6H2p0pXh


    Let me know how my paper is. Any recommendations on how to improve it?

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    I like it actually
    Does the teacher look for punctuation/capitalization?

    Just saw 'JAva' at the last paragraph, minor, but everything else was good and a good read

    ...but JAva has stood the test of time and has changed my life, and hopefully will change other peoples lives as well.

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    Quote Originally Posted by THE MAYOR View Post
    Some parts don't really read that easy. I made a few suggestions. I hope you use Word.

    http://dl.dropbox.com/u/88974267/John%20Hamlett2.doc
    True, at some points it was not very east to read. I would of worded some things differently, but I think Mayor summed it up nicely.
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    Mayor, have you considered becoming a teacher?

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    i disagree, C++ has stood the test of time

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    Quote Originally Posted by THE MAYOR View Post
    I teach at university
    That'd be why

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    Quote Originally Posted by The Mayor View Post
    I teach at university
    Any hint at what university?
    Got me

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    Quote Originally Posted by The Mayor View Post
    No sorry
    You must be one of those younger teachers... please don't reply- it'd be weird if you were old.
    You have permission to steal anything I've ever made...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Joseph D View Post
    You must be one of those younger teachers... please don't reply- it'd be weird if you were old.
    Lol why would it be weird? :P

    It was a good read. There was one or two run on sentences and a few commas here and there that should be added/removed. I'm sure The Mayor fixed them up.

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